Things I’ve Learned While Revising…

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1. I am way too attached to dialogue tags and particularly to the word, “says.”

2. When I draft, it’s bare bones. When I revise, I add a LOT. I’m sure a lot of writers are like this, but I always hear of drafts being LONG and when revising they need to cut. I’m the exact opposite.

RANDOM: Each draft I revised, the word count went up 10k words.

3. When I thought my book was done in May, I didn’t realize that it was too plot heavy. I had a book that had a plot and I stuck characters in there to move the plot forward. What I realized in revising is that the book needs to be about characters reacting to the plot. It’s all about the characters.

4. All characters have to have motivations and backstories that justify their reactions. Most of the time, those backstories aren’t mentioned, but if you as the author know them, writing them is more natural and the reader understands without even knowing.

5. You’re never really done. I thought I was done, and find myself re-writing two chapters today. I know that one day I just have to BE done, but I’ve learned a big difference between copywriting and novel writing. I can feel done when I complete a copywriting project and I have yet to feel done while novel writing. There is always room for improvement.

 

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Go Time!

Today is the alternate round of Pitch Wars!

Thanks a bazillion to my mentor Trisha Leigh whose insights, encouragement and brilliant suggestions made my manuscript a whole new shiny object! Thanks to my fellow mentee Anna Patel for all the encouragement and behind the scene freak outs! And finally special thanks to Brenda Drake and Dee Romito for hosting and putting this whole contest on!

This was such a fun experience and I met so many amazing writer friends! I am so happy I was asked to be involved!

#TeamLeighgit #forever

 

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Revision Update

My OH my!!!

What began as a simple revision has really evolved into almost a totally new book. I have learned so much from Trisha that I will forever be grateful to her for all her writerly wisdom she has bestowed upon me!

If nothing else comes from this Pitch Wars contest, I will have at least learned how to be a better writer. I learned a lot about plot structuring and character arcs and unnecessary dialogue tags! 🙂

I’m still not done revising and the deadline is creeping up on me.

Oh and did I mention that we are moving the weekend before the contest goes live and all my revisions are due?

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How I’m going to balance work, parenting, volunteer stuff, writing, revisions, school, family, friends AND moving… actually just thinking about all that makes me sleepy. Night y’all!